I and My Annabelle Lee.
My child
she solem
to my funer
I wrote
for me alone
who had stole
But she broke
smili
And now I lay, broke
In my sepul
in my tomb by the sounding sea,
plagued by the thought
of my Annabelle Lee.
"Hi, I'm Nick. This is my blog, the endless stream of consciousness that always seems to be falling out of my mind. I think a lot, and I believe that my posts are pretty deep. Thanks for reading."
"Take a look at a specific post."
My child
she solem
to my funer
I wrote
for me alone
who had stole
But she broke
smili
And now I lay, broke
In my sepul
in my tomb by the sounding sea,
plagued by the thought
of my Annabelle Lee.
May 28, 2008 at 3:17 PM
Obviously, as I stated to you, I really like/love this poem. The fact that you could keep such a strict rhyme scheme is impressive - usually I tire of doing it myself after a few lines. It really works here. Plus, the sea imagery doesn't hurt either. =P
To steal someone's heart "so viciously" sounds more passionate than, well, vicious - I like it (which at this point is seemingly trite to say, sorry!).
Oh Annabelle Lee, how could you do such a terrible thing to Nick? Haha.
I don't want to ruin this poem by posting such a poopy comment, just know me le gusta mucho! top